I'm thrilled to be chatting with a paranormal author today. Or should that be 'with an author of paranormal stories'?
V L MURRAY
Welcome to my blog, Lynne.
Thanks Wendy, it’s really nice to be here.
I enjoyed A Hallowe'en Tale. This is a very
entertaining short story with which teens will identify. In fact, your story
revived a particular childhood memory for me. I relived the night a friend and
I crept out of bed to peer through the window of a deserted house a few streets
away. Jumping at shadows, we scared ourselves silly and didn't achieve our
objective. Your teenagers did, however, and what a tale they have to tell!
Glad you liked it and that’s wonderful it stimulated you
to remember something supernatural from your own past.
I had the impression that Olivia's mother wanted Olivia to
get a glimpse of her history, and that's why she warned her not to go to
the party via the old lane, knowing Olivia would disobey. Am I right?
Oh yes. How many kids do you know that when you tell them
not to do something they immediately do it. Yes, Cantare knew her
daughter well and in telling her what not to do, she pretty much
guaranteed the outcome.
How much of your inner child is in Olivia? Were you
headstrong and stubborn?
Yup, I think I was a real pain in the butt for my mom. I
was unbelievably stubborn and headstrong, but hey, if your kids aren’t, they
end up getting bullied and other things, so I think there is something to be said
for these characteristics.
My dad used to tell us almost everyday that
ninety-nine percent of the people in the world are sheep, and he’d say, “Where
do you fit in? What are you going to be?”
Made me think and that was probably
one of the reasons why I did what I believed in and questioned things. That is
what Olivia is doing in the story. She’s stepping up to the challenge, facing
her fears and finding out the truth. Just think what the world would be like if
we all did those things.
However, it is also nice when children obey their
parents and listen to them. Parents have more of life under their belt and kids
usually don’t really understand that until they, too, are grown up.
Was there 'an old lane leading through the back fields' in
your youth?
Actually, I lived right across the street from a forest
and when I was young, the fields to the north were totally wild and free, as
well. There were partridges running around and we played games trying to touch
their tails before they took off. I don’t remember anyone actually achieving
that goal. I spent much of my youth running in the woods and knew every turn
and nook and cranny of the forest. There are spooky things in there that
sometimes jar you a little. But I survived. LOL.
We had to drive to get to the more historic things, but
my parents were big history fans and so they took us to old buildings and
museums and any archaeological sites that were around. I had my share of
adventures. The Royal Ontario Museum was in Toronto, an hour away, and they had
a huge Egyptian section with mummies and all sorts of cool things. Very
stimulating for a young mind.
The mother's rocking and humming unnerved me. It served as a
good means to build tension and suspense. The mother held all of the story
elements together. Was this your intention?
Oh yeah. I’m glad it was effective. You never know unless
someone else tells you. Cantare is a special person who can call in the
supernatural world to help her. Sound is the means of creation for all beings,
both in the heavenlies and on earth. Most people just don’t realize it. Cantare
was creating the scenario for her daughter so that she would understand the
seriousness of what had happened in the past and forget about the idea of the
celebrity of it all.
The description of the fancy dress costumes seemed too real
to have come from your imagination alone, in particular the one Giles designed
for Jared. Without giving too much away, can you tell us if this was a costume
you were familiar with in real life?
Actually almost all of it came out of my mind. I
envisioned the headless horseman in Johnny Depp’s movie—which is still a
favourite—to give Jared something really funky. And of course the modern teen
would wear a black T shirt with a skull on it, what else? With Giles, I was
thinking period costume with a little bit of English riding habit thrown in.
Very noble. Perhaps the prince in Sleeping Beauty was coming through.
I particularly liked Olivia's costume. What a wonderful
idea. It warmed my heart.
Did this have some basis in truth?
The outfit that Olivia wore was something I would wear,
especially the turban. I love turbans,
as you can tell by my author’s picture. I love pink peonies and shawls and
moccasins—I spent years wearing only moccasins—so, she was definitely in the
costume I would have worn.
In one five star review, the reviewer commented that A Hallowe'en Tale 'contains far more than meets the eye'. Can you explain this multi layering? Would you say a teenage reader would pick this up or be satisfied with the adventure in the story?
Yes, there are quite a few layers to the tale. We have
the simple Hallowe’en Party and friends going out for fun. We have a teenage
girl who is trying to make herself feel a little more important by making sure
her friends know that her family had a link to the place where they were going.
We have a history lesson about something that happened in our past.
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| Artist F.T. Merrill 1886 |
This illustration depicts the execution of Ann Hibbins on
Boston Common in 1656.
There were
real people hurt in the witch trials that occurred all over the world for
varying reasons. In the Wiccan world those events are referred to as the
Women’s Holocaust, even though many men were killed as well. Then finally we
have a paranormal event which leaves everyone thinking and scratching their
heads.
To answer the second part of
the question: I think most teens would get the layers, not necessarily
consciously unless they were pointed out.
Do you call on your own memory when writing stories, or are
they mainly pure fiction?
They are always a mix of fiction and reality. They say
the best way to write convincing fiction is to pull it out of your own life and
make it unrecognizable. I like to come up with characters who have connections
to my world, whether past or present, plus I like to create people and
scenarios that I wish were real.
I think that’s how the future sometimes comes about. If
we look at some of the great sci-fi authors we see our present in their
writings from the past. So who’s to say what a writer can do if they are
convincing enough.
That is also a reason why all writer’s need to be
cautious with their tales. What we write as thrilling or scary or a perfect
murder, can be fuel for someone else’s actions. I was involved with Law
Enforcement years ago, and you see scenarios acted out daily which have come
directly from fictional sources or the publication of real events that are
often horrific. When the abnormal mind gets stimulated by these kinds of
things, it can get pretty hair-raising, so we as writers have an obligation to
censor ourselves sometimes for the good of the general population.
I’m probably in the minority with that belief. Most
people think they should tell all and the public has a right to know, but I
taught kids for almost thirty years and most kids and adults, can’t handle the
truth. It can be quite traumatizing. If I had seen what the teens in my story
saw, I would have been terrified and there is no way I would have done what
Olivia did. I would have turned the other way and said, “See you.” Maybe later
I might have wished I’d checked it out, but I am not traditionally one of those
people who goes into a dark alley without lots of back-up. LOL
You say form and punctuation are just other ways to make
words sing. How do you bring out the music in your writing?
It’s the way you put it on the page. Every punctuation mark
has a sound with it. If you put in a comma, you hesitate slightly but the pitch
stays at the same level. If you put in a period, you stop, but your voice falls.
A question mark makes you raise your voice and an em dash also makes your voice
go up but in a different way. There is a hesitation that lifts and then makes
you fall into the next word, like you just came over the other side of a hill
and you are now on the way down. Italics on a single word add emphasis so you
automatically say the word a little louder.
Separating a single sentence or a couple of words into a
paragraph all by themselves, really makes you stop. It headlines the
presentation. So format can be intrinsic to your scenario as well.
I always read everything out loud, both my own writing
and the manuscripts that I get to edit. There is a certain rhythm that needs to
be in a sentence. And when you end a work, it is really important that the
music of the words also brings you to a close. Writing an ending of a story is
like writing the end of a sermon. If the preacher doesn’t get it right,
everyone just sits there and looks around the room like they’re saying, “Hmmm,
what do we do now?”
A good ending will bring you to your feet with cheers, or
make you cry, or at least stop and stare off into space. All that is done with
the sound of the words and how they are connected or brought to a close.
Important editorial tips here, Lynne. Thank you.
As an editor with MuseItUp publishing, you must read many
stories with your editorial eye. Do you have trouble turning off your inner
editor when writing your own first drafts?
Yes, and thank God for that. The last thing I want to do
is turn it off in that situation. It makes me constantly check myself so my own
editor doesn’t want to kill me.
Where the desire to edit drives me nuts the most, is when
I am reading a newspaper or watching a movie or TV with the captions on. Then I
am in real trouble because I see every error and can’t concentrate on the task
at hand. I try to remember that most captions are probably done with Dragon
Speaking Naturally and so that is why they sometimes look like a foreign
language.
Would you like to add anything else?
Well, just that I appreciate the chance to come aboard
and chat. It’s been fun. Thanks so much for the opportunity to talk more about
the story, certainly the historical aspect of it.
There’s an amazing series of
three films that the National Film Board of Canada made on this topic. One is
called The Burning Times. You can watch it for free on the site. Just google
it. It is really amazing and enlightening. You will be shocked and saddened by
what you see.
It's been a lovely chat, Lynne, I wish you much success with this thought provoking short story A Hallowe'en Tale. I enjoyed it very much.
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